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Darkness shrouds me
As shadows befall my soul
My heart resonates inside
With its seemingly lifeless beat
No longer does love reside within
The flames of passion extinguished
Only hurt and anger live on
Echoing within the depths of my being
©2005-2010 ~krazychic917
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Scrap? I wrote it when I was in a very sensitive state so it may not be that great. It's just how I feel . .

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:iconday-dreamer07:
One thing I learned a while ago is that true feelings beyond anything else are what make poetry great.
Ponderings was my first piece of poetry where I wasn't too chicken to write about my feelings.
If that's how you felt, that's all that matters. Beautiful poem, and I hope things don't stay too dark for you. :)

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Thanks sugar :hug:

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
:icongothicfaerie1024:
" the flames of passion extinguished"
yep, thats how i feel pedro :hug: :tears:
:iconkrazychic917:
I wrote that thinking of myself but I guess it fits everyone's life right about now . . .

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.

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