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A Severed Love by ~krazychic917:iconkrazychic917:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Blood flows freely
As a love is severed clean
Nothing can heal a broken heart
Or mend a shattered soul
Bittersweet first love
Drowning in despair
Waves of anger and shed tears
Cleanse my wounds
Hurt consumes my bleeding heart
While my lovesick mind ponders

                                   Will I ever love again?
©2005-2010 ~krazychic917
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Once again, fleeing love is the inspiration. Scrap?

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*Day-Dreamer07 Jul 19, 2005, 1:56:28 PM
ah.
The all to universal phrase. :)
This is fine as a deviation, it's something we can all relate too. :thumbsup::)

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~AellaWind Jul 20, 2005, 9:03:50 AM
It's sad, and severed loves always make you wonder if you'll be able to love again...

:hug:

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If you have to think about whether you love someone or not, then the answer is no.
When you love someone... you just know.

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~krazychic917 Jul 21, 2005, 8:10:21 AM
Thanks :hug:

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
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~krazychic917 Jul 21, 2005, 8:17:54 AM
Thanks!

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
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~gothicfaerie1024 Jul 23, 2005, 7:15:35 PM
"Nothing can heal a broken heart
Or mend a shattered soul
Bittersweet first love
Drowning in despair"

Too true...how's Kayla holding up? And how are you...pissed, sad, numb? Im a fucking wreck.
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~krazychic917 Jul 24, 2005, 12:37:33 PM
Well, Kayla's better since Mike and her made up . . . I'm trying to make myself feel better. Let's be wrecks together!

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
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~gothicfaerie1024 Jul 25, 2005, 7:58:45 AM
being a wreck makes you feel a lot better, rather than lying about "being OK"
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~krazychic917 Jul 25, 2005, 1:03:05 PM
Well, if you need me to be a wreck with you, I'll be happy to oblige!

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
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~krazychic917 Jul 25, 2005, 1:04:46 PM
Well, if you need me to be a wreck with you, I'll be happy to oblige!

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Death and danger do not have to come with trappings. They can come to you in the sweet breath of your beloved. Or on a sunny afternoon in a fish market with "La Macarena" playing on a boom box.
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